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Friday, 14 September 2018

Have You Been To Castle Hill?.. If You Haven't, You've Been Living Under A Rock!



In class, we have been told to create a commercial slideshow, or video, describing a country, city, or town. The idea came from a learning site called the Footsteps Challenge. Our teacher Mr Adams has put this together with are homework. This is what I did...

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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 September 2018 at 11:20

    Hi Francesca,
    I really enjoyed your slideshow presentation. I liked how it included some pictures of you at Castle Hill! It gave many useful facts, including where it is located, the history and so on. The pretty photos of them in the background really added a nice effect. Next time you could do your presentation on something different then a Google Slide, because everyone uses it. Try something like Powtoon! Really good job!

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  2. Anonymous17 September 2018 at 12:26

    Hi Laura,
    Thank you for your detailed comment, I will definitely use the feedback you gave me, as it is super useful.

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  3. Anonymous25 September 2018 at 12:31

    Hey Franky
    I also love castle hill and I can tell you do too. You did lots of facts and it was very interesting I hope one day I can walk through the caves, it would be a great experience. Over all it was a very informed slide and it was very clear to read.

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  4. Anonymous30 November 2018 at 10:06

    Hey Franky! <3

    I really enjoyed this slideshow. You added beautiful images and text full of information. This slideshow reminded me of the time I went to Castle Hill.

    Kind regards,
    Anna

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